Saturday, March 2, 2024

I'm tellin' you it's got to be the end



 "Hey, you gotta minute?" Chewy peeked into the kitchen of the coffee shop. It was a small space, but Sunny was prepping some cookies to bake.

Of course, Sunny was surprised. Maybe it was Hart. She had been waiting to hear from him for days. But of course, it wasn't.

"So it's you!" He pointed his finger at her. He was quite the drama queen with long dark hair and all. "You did this."

"Did what?" Sunny froze, feeling she was being investigated by somebody's jilted lover. Her eyes tensed not sure what she was supposed to do.

"Hart went back to Paris," he said.

"Paris?" She didn't blink. "How do you know?"

"He was heartbroken," he put his hand to his forehead as his long hair flung about as if he was a disaster waiting to happen.

"Who are you?" She wanted to know in broken English. Although, he talked mostly in Korean Sunny was certain he mixed in a little Chinese too.  

"His roommate." He looked stunned that she didn't know.

"Are you sure?" She tilted her head as if he wasn't being candid.

"Yes." His brow furrowed as if she was making him mad.

"Nothing more?" Sunny summed it up. He was just too pretty for his own good.

"Hart never said anything about me?"

"No."

"Oh, you're the girl who doesn't smile," he fretted. "Sunny." It was as if she was a snag in his fitful dance.

Sunny kept her arms crossed. 

"Well, aren't you going to get me Americano?" He shot her a look that he needed service. 

Sunny rolled her eyes and went to get one before he shouted what a bad waiter she was. 

Of course, he found a table and looked to be in the crapper. Meanwhile, Chewy told her the long-haired dude was Louie.

"I think he's looking for a roommate, Hart didn't pay the rent."

18 comments:

  1. very nice - you have a great immagination

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  3. " A garota que nΓ£o sorrir." Eu sorriria pra ele neste momento, mas o sorriso seria irΓ΄nico....Beijos!

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    1. "The girl who doesn't smile." I would smile at him at this point, but the smile would be ironic.... Kisses!πŸ’•πŸ€πŸ’šπŸ€πŸ’•

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  4. ELO?????

    Back to Paris> And Chewy the roommate? Airrr. How is this going to go for Sunny?

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  5. Uy pobre es terrible cuando no te pagan lo que te deben. Te mando un beso.

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    1. Oh, poor thing is terrible when you don't get paid what you're owed. I send you a kiss.

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  6. I'm curious to see if this is the beginning of a friendship. They vibe quite nicely with one another.

    xx

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  7. Louie, the dude with the dark hair, Hart's roomate, accusing Sunnie , the Korean girl, of Hart's going to Paris without paying his rent. Oh, dear! She got two blows: 1.Hart to Paris 2. she was in his eyes ' the girl that doesn't smile'.

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  8. So interesting chapter!!!
    I really love this story! So than you for sharing
    Kisses ♥

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  9. Very interesting story 😊

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  10. Sunny seems stuck
    But more because of Hart 's roommate πŸ˜‚

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  11. Sunny who doesn't smile . . . I like that, or at least the way it sounds. And Louie is quite a character! His hair alone packs a punch. I'll be interested to see how he fits into this ever-evolving cast. πŸŒžπŸ–€πŸŒžπŸ–€

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