"This does not sound like a good start to the new year," Jade said to Carmen over lunch in the breakroom. Both had started their low-carb diet and were sampling chips that had 18 grams of protein.
"Oh well," Carmen said, maybe it was the weather. At the moment, it was getting colder, and the rain was turning to snow. Jade hoped they closed early, but she doubted it.
"But you two just got married, maybe he wanted to go on a honeymoon," Jade mentioned, Justin, Carmen's husband.
"We both knew we didn't have time for that. He's got that job he's been working for at the hospital," Carmen sighed. Justin was still giving her the silent treatment. "Has Ari ever done that to you?"
"Um, he just starts cleaning a lot," Jade noted. She sipped on her diet drink. Carmen drained hers.
"I really want pizza," Carmen squinted.
"Me too. But maybe we can go at the end of the month." Jade shrugged back.
Carmen looked as if she dreaded going home. Jade grabbed her phone. "Let's just get pizza after work and meet up at my place. You text Justin, and I'll text Ari." Jade didn't want to say it, but maybe Ari could fix this, after all, he was the one who got Justin to the States to begin with.
"Oh yeah, I keep forgetting that," Carmen smiled. "And to think he thought Justin was his long-lost brother."
"Yeah, Ari gets it done. I think they just liked knowing each other online." Jade got a text back from Ari and said OK.
"Do they keep in touch anymore?"
"Not like in the beginning." Jade nodded as she put her phone away. "I mean, sometimes, you can only do so much for someone. I know Justin likes it here. I know he's happy with you."
Carmen nodded. "I guess it's all the family stuff. If it were just us, he'd be fine."
"We don't live in a perfect world, but your parents haven't even visited since you two tied the knot." Jade looked at Carmen's sad face. Finally, Carmen got a ding from Justin. Jade knew that smile meant he was coming to dinner.
"Maybe you two could stay over, try out guestroom."
"You have a guestroom?" Carmen's smile was open.
"Yeah, I don't think it'll ever be a nursery." Jade spoke so quietly Carmen didn't even hear her.
Just got married and already not happy?
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ReplyDeleteGood news. I' m Happy for Carmen
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ReplyDeletePizza may not fit into a low-carbohydrate diet, but it tastes good. :)
ReplyDeleteAmo la pizza, te mando un beso.
ReplyDeletePostponing pizza until the end of the month....They must be taking their low card diet seriously. Honestly, I do not think I could do a low or no card diet. I need my carbs. Of course, if I had a health problem, I would be able to give up carbs but it would never be a first dieting option for me, if you know what I mean. For most people a balanced diet is the best way. There is definitely a way to eat carbs and keep a balanced diet. However, maybe some people are so addicted to carbs they need to go cold turkey. I do not know, I'm just thinking aloud.
ReplyDeleteI like how you include food details into your chapters. You often write about what your characters are eating or craving. I think it adds realness to them. We all need food to survive. Plus, food choices often reflect our mood and even culture. Food is a fascinating subject. Sometimes you describe dishes so well you make me hungry.
Anyhow, this is a nice chapter with well written dialogues. This like made me think- "We don't live in a perfect world, but your parents haven't even visited since you two tied the knot." I know people are busy, but surely visiting newlyweds should take priority? At least visit them once or make plans to visit them. It's important. No wonder Carmen has a sad face. It is nice that Carmen got a smile on her face when she heard from Justin. It is sweet how Jade knew the smile on Carmen meant that Justin was coming to dinner. I guess Jade really knows Carmen. Sometimes we go from sad to happy real quick, isn't it so? Sweet chapter.
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ReplyDeleteThis was such a relatable and well-written scene. I love the dynamic between Jade and Carmen, especially how they support each other through the typical New Year diet struggles and more serious marriage stuff. That quiet line at the end about the nursery adds such a poignant touch to the whole conversation.
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