Gabapentine makes it hard to pee. Louis was certain of this now. Or was it the fact that someone had to watch you pee that was so detrimental? It was on his mind when he stepped into the elevator alone. Thank god, one test was over. Now he just needed to focus on work. He'd get on his e-bike and make his way to work.
But when Monica stepped in alone on his ride up, she surprised him.
"Where's?" Louis didn't know his name. It was an accident that he knew Monica's name. Not that he was supposed to know. If only he could keep his mouth shut. But she was alone. And there was this opportunity. He shook the thought. "I thought he would be with you."
"My roommate?" She broke the ice with a delightful smile. Louis responded with a smile as if it was all OK. Just what he needed to hear.
He nodded.
"I'm going to work," she told him.
"Me, too." He nodded back, although he hated his job. It was horrible at work. He didn't want to be there, but he had to. In fact, it was driving him crazy, but everyone expected him to be there, so there was no way out of it.
"So, you know me?" She looked surprised.
"Um, not really, but I see you together." He told her.
"He's just my roommate." She nodded.
Louis nodded back as if he could agree. It was actually nice to know. Although, he wasn't sure where he could go from here with the information. Maybe this was enough to know. He'd thought about her in passing, but that was it.
Besides, he did have some problems. And he doubted Monica would want to know any of them.

Seems Monica is interested in Louis too :-)
ReplyDeleteI think that as well 🙂
DeleteMonica is nice to everyone, and yeah, maybe she's looking for love. Let's hope not in the wrong place.
DeleteGubawhat? LOL
ReplyDeleteIt's an antidepressant.
DeleteLouis is intriguing. Can't wait for more.
ReplyDeleteOh, I just had to find someone for Monica. Maybe Randy will notice.
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Nice chapter.
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DeleteGreat story. Have a nice day 😊
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DeleteThis has that awkward in-between moment feeling nailed down, where nothing dramatic is happening but everything feels slightly off anyway. The elevator exchange especially feels very real, like two people filling silence while both of them are a bit in their own heads. Louis comes across a bit stuck in himself, which makes the whole thing feel tense in a quiet way rather than loud or obvious.
ReplyDeleteI don't want Louis to come off as a stalker, but I think he does see coupling all around him, while he's all alone and possibly being bullied at work.
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ReplyDeleteWhat a sweet conversation, I can picture the scene perfectly.
Thanks so much!
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ReplyDeleteGreat chapter, as always it's a pleasure to read you, greetings
ReplyDeleteOOh I love the slight flirting (or is it flirting)? I guess not, bt he's clearly thought about her a bit. If only in passing
ReplyDeleteInteresting conversation. Great chapter.
ReplyDeleteGreat post! Thanks for sharing it with us!
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